PREVENTION IS BETTER THAN CURE

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Outlines : It is an old saying which holds true in daily life. Tt means that we should prevent a disease by observing a simple rule of ‘hygiene instead of later on letting the disease spread and require loti of efforts for its cure. Prevention is always better than cure because i,t nips the trouble in the bud. This principle is highly useful in daily life and can save a lot of botheration vvhich.woukl , otherwise have to be faced. ‘A stitch in time saves nine’ is another saying which means more or less the same thing.
Essay :
‘Prevention is better tnan cure” is a wise saying which ha^ comedown to us since ages. It holds true for ever. The wisdom of the saying lies in the fact that a little effort in the early pha^ of a problem helps to solve it before it becomes too difficult to be solved. This principle is always observed by wise people to succeed in life. Those who do not observe this principle usually suffer even if they are intelligent and hard-working. Observance of this principle becomes a part of one’s nature ; indifference to this principle also becomes a bad habit leading to uneasy consequences.
If one sees symptoms of a disease, it is advisible to immediately go to the doctor, get it diagnosed and follow the treatment. Any negligence at the earlier stages of a disease leads to complications and deterioration. Going to the doctor at a late stage will not only mean more expense but may also endanger the life of the person. Prevention is, therefore, better than cure. Unclean state of affairs in one’s household can lead to many diseases. The members of one’s family can catch malaria or any other disease owing to the mosquitoes that multiply in an unclean place. Stagnant water, dirty latrines, unclean floors and dirty and stale food, over-ripe fruits and the like can cause so many diseases whose cure will cost a lot of botheration and money. It is better to remove all these unclean habits and prevent the occurrence of the disease. Prevention is better than cure again.
If one is a student, it is better to study regularly. If one ignores one’s lessons in the early stages so as to work hard during the examination days, one is in for trouble. One’s early carelessness can cost one success in the examination. One should study tiie lessons regularly in keeping with the requirements of the class, under instructions of the teacher, if one wants to fare well in the examination. One should prevent failure than face the failure and try hard to overcome it. One may have to hire a costly tutor or lose one’s health—physical and mental—to recoup the lost time. Prevention is better than cure again.
The principle also holds good in the matter of building good habits. If a person wants to develop good habits» he must lay a sound foundation for them. To keep to the morals and principles of good character, it is desirable to avoid bad habits of drinking, smoking, etc. Once” one starts on the wrong lines, there is no end to the dirty ways. It is always better to avoid dirty habits from early childhood. We should nip the evil in the bud from the very beginning.

25 thoughts on “PREVENTION IS BETTER THAN CURE”

  2. observador

    Hello there,
    your essay shows potential. I see that you have many examples and illustrations which is very helpful in discursive essays. But you might want to add some Conjunctive adverbs and transitional expressions to create complex relationships between ideas.

    -and Correlative conjunctions to join various sentence elements that should be treated as grammatically equal. always avoid any use of slang and slang interjections such as: “in for trouble”

    - semi colons should only be used to separate closely related independent clauses or to help sort out a monster list: for example: Hartford, Connecticut; Boston, Massachusetts; Newport, Rhode Island…

    -to create complex relationships between ideas you could:

    -Write a summary at the end of your essay, you could start with all in all, altogether, as has been said, finally, in brief, in conclusion, in other words, in particular, in short, in simpler terms…

    -Compare and contrast (which you did but could use more conjunctive adverbs): also, in the same way, likewise, similarly… Although, and yet, at the same time, despite that, even so, even though, in contrast, in spite of, nevertheless…

    -And time sequence: after a while, afterward, again, also, and then, as long as, at last, at length, at that time, before, besides, earlier, eventually, finally, formerly, further, furthermore…

    ☆However do not interlard your text with transitional expressions merely because you know these devices connect ideas.
    They must appear, naturally, where they belong so you should practice by inserting a tentative however, nevertheless, consequently. Reread the essay later to see if these words provide the glue you needed at those points.

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    1. Bruno Frankelly

      What yuck, what disgusting, what good thing you’ve done to your neighbor to act like you’re perfect? Diana, your attitude is the exact opposite of your name. Ang pangit mo….

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  6. jani

    i m very happy to see that the observers are also check the corrections and they teach the others what they wrote wrong and what they wrote correct, they teach each other, this is really a nice way of teaching, this essay and observer’s observation is really a very nice

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  21. shubham

    i must say that its really very nice and i hope that everybody will like it. WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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